Comments for Stand Up Comedy Clinic http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com Fri, 31 Jul 2015 15:58:36 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=4.2.3 Comment on The Best Way to Write a Comedy Act if You’re an Absolute Newbie by Ademosu Ayodeji http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/the-best-way-to-write-a-comedy-act-if-youre-an-absolute-newbie/comment-page-1/#comment-1340 Fri, 31 Jul 2015 15:58:36 +0000 http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/?p=7506#comment-1340 Thank you sir.

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Comment on How to Write Comedy Like Daniel Tosh – A Deconstruction by Paul Kuhnast http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/how-to-write-stand-up-comedy-like-daniel-tosh-a-deconstruction/comment-page-1/#comment-1339 Fri, 31 Jul 2015 15:58:36 +0000 http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/?p=6662#comment-1339 Wow loved this deconstruction. So useful for learning.. i just want more and more. I found this by searching for deconstructed comedy routine (or something like that).. had never seen this site before. Well done, i persisted through the long post but honestly it didnt get boring, it sidnt feel too long. You’re amazing.

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Comment on The Best Way to Write a Comedy Act if You’re an Absolute Newbie by Gaye Freedman http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/the-best-way-to-write-a-comedy-act-if-youre-an-absolute-newbie/comment-page-1/#comment-1338 Fri, 31 Jul 2015 07:43:33 +0000 http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/?p=7506#comment-1338 Thank you great post!

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Comment on The Best Way to Write a Comedy Act if You’re an Absolute Newbie by David Smith http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/the-best-way-to-write-a-comedy-act-if-youre-an-absolute-newbie/comment-page-1/#comment-1337 Thu, 30 Jul 2015 21:43:43 +0000 http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/?p=7506#comment-1337 Thanks, Jerry. I am digging these. I used your pointers to write this bit for my show: https://youtu.be/kk98qa66U6U

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Comment on The Best Way to Write a Comedy Act if You’re an Absolute Newbie by Trevor Dean http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/the-best-way-to-write-a-comedy-act-if-youre-an-absolute-newbie/comment-page-1/#comment-1336 Tue, 28 Jul 2015 21:58:32 +0000 http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/?p=7506#comment-1336 Over this last month I have wrote four stories, this is the type of material headliners would talk about. I edited it every day, for a month. At first I wrote just the facts without trying to make it funny. Then, each time I re-read it I would plug in the appropriate comedy structures. My act only currently utilizes about half of the laugh triggers and half of the comedy formulas, but that’s okay since I am only four years into it.

From now on any material I write if it’s new, doesn’t go on stage for at least a month because that is how long it takes to get clarity from the material, to get a crystal clear idea of what you are telling the audience. With each time through the material it gets tighter with laugh points along the way to the punchline. Material doesn’t work the first time it comes out of your mouth. I’ve learned the hard way about that!

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Comment on How to Write Comedy Like Daniel Tosh – A Deconstruction by Adrian Norman http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/how-to-write-stand-up-comedy-like-daniel-tosh-a-deconstruction/comment-page-1/#comment-1334 Tue, 21 Jul 2015 17:43:43 +0000 http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/?p=6662#comment-1334 Great stuff Jerry! I love your analysis…. you really broke everything down so you can see the craft behind the performance. This is a great choice of comics. Good to understand what is really happening behind this edgy comedy…nothing’s new.

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Comment on How to Write Comedy Like Daniel Tosh – A Deconstruction by Kannon D. Hardy http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/how-to-write-stand-up-comedy-like-daniel-tosh-a-deconstruction/comment-page-1/#comment-1333 Mon, 20 Jul 2015 17:43:44 +0000 http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/?p=6662#comment-1333 Thank you for sharing your knowledge, wisdom & insight on analyzing this joke. Today homework assignment; write out one of your favorite comedian jokes and analyze it. Thanks Jerry

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Comment on How To Be A Famous Comedian by Derrick Cribb http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/how-to-be-a-famous-comedian/comment-page-1/#comment-1332 Sat, 18 Jul 2015 06:44:19 +0000 http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/?p=802#comment-1332 This is very inspiring and good advice. I mean great advice. Trying to consider one fear at a time. I’ll start writing asap as much as possible also. Thank you sooo much for your expertise.

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Comment on How To Write Funny by Mario Paul http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/how-to-write-funny/comment-page-1/#comment-1331 Wed, 15 Jul 2015 04:59:05 +0000 http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/?p=2094#comment-1331 This is wonderful…….makes comedy very easy and interesting #GodBlessYou

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Comment on Measuring Yourself Against The Better You by Joseph Bennett http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/measuring-yourself-against-the-better-you/comment-page-1/#comment-1329 Mon, 13 Jul 2015 00:44:10 +0000 http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/?p=6771#comment-1329 Beautiful prose, truly. Thanks Jerry!

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Comment on Comedian Lessons | Jokes About Death by Business Lunch Productions http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/comedian-lessons-jokes-about-death/comment-page-1/#comment-1328 Sun, 12 Jul 2015 17:28:44 +0000 http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/?p=1504#comment-1328 Couldn’t agree more. Here’s some funnies we made in the wake of some really rough times:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kQz5wzlqd34

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Comment on Measuring Yourself Against The Better You by Philip E Lipp http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/measuring-yourself-against-the-better-you/comment-page-1/#comment-1327 Sat, 11 Jul 2015 14:44:31 +0000 http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/?p=6771#comment-1327 good stuff, good thoughts to start the day

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Comment on Measuring Yourself Against The Better You by Mark Villa http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/measuring-yourself-against-the-better-you/comment-page-1/#comment-1326 Sat, 11 Jul 2015 14:14:08 +0000 http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/?p=6771#comment-1326 Thank you for this Jerry. You don’t know how much this speaks to me. Been facing lots of doubt lately. This helps in keeping my head up and just pushing forward my goals. Thank you so much for sharing your story and this!

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Comment on How to Write Comedy Like Daniel Tosh – A Deconstruction by Justin Ezzi http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/how-to-write-stand-up-comedy-like-daniel-tosh-a-deconstruction/comment-page-1/#comment-1325 Fri, 10 Jul 2015 05:45:56 +0000 http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/?p=6662#comment-1325 I’ve heard this Tosh bit several times. I really appreciated the breakdown. Well done Jerry!

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Comment on How to Write Comedy Like Daniel Tosh – A Deconstruction by John W. Allison http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/how-to-write-stand-up-comedy-like-daniel-tosh-a-deconstruction/comment-page-1/#comment-1324 Tue, 07 Jul 2015 16:58:51 +0000 http://www.standupcomedyclinic.com/?p=6662#comment-1324 Stunningly astute analysis. Great complimentary piece to your Comedy DNA e-book. Thanks for putting it together.

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