8-Week Class
Creating Surprise by recognizing the opportunity to take a phrase an reframe it to its simple truth.

Instructor:
Jerry Corley
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Quick recap
This meeting was a comedy writing class focused on teaching joke creation techniques, specifically the listing technique and irony in comedy. Jerry guided students through exercises using professions like stripper, surgeon, and marine to generate jokes based on irony and unexpected circumstances. Students practiced identifying unassailable truths and creating humorous connections between dissimilar ideas. The class included discussions about making comedy conversational rather than scripted, with specific feedback to Colin about delivering stories naturally rather than in a formal presentation style. Students shared various joke ideas including scenarios about prison cookies, medical professionals, and unexpected outcomes, with Jerry providing guidance on refining setups and punchlines to ensure they contained authentic, verifiable elements.
Next steps:
More Practice with the Listing Technique is suggested. Link will be in Homework Downloads.
Summary
Comedy Techniques Discussion Meeting
Jerry led a discussion on comedy techniques, focusing on the incongruity listing method where participants identify two dissimilar ideas in headlines or facts about specific topics to generate creative material. Josh shared his practice joke about a woman with a crucifix between her cleavage, which Jerry helped refine by suggesting it could be reimagined as a commentary on keeping religious symbols above the neckline. The conversation also touched on Josh's upcoming open mic performance at the Stardome in Birmingham, where Jerry advised him to practice making eye contact with individual audience members and treating them as friends to overcome stage anxiety.
Chappelle's Saudi Arabia Performance Discussion
The group discussed Dave Chappelle's recent performance in Saudi Arabia, with Jerry expressing criticism of Chappelle's argument about freedom of expression being greater there. Jerry argued that Chappelle's claim was misleading, pointing out that there are still consequences for speech in Saudi Arabia, unlike in the US where comedians like George Carlin and Lenny Bruce faced legal challenges for their material. The conversation then shifted to comedy techniques, specifically focusing on incongruity jokes, where Tara presented examples about doctors prescribing unusual items like psilocybin or organizing orgies.
Humor and Writing Techniques
The group discussed various topics related to humor and writing, including the irony in Canadian drug pricing and the MAID (Medical Assistance in Dying) program. Jerry provided feedback on Tara's joke writing progress and emphasized the importance of practicing the listing technique to generate humor. The conversation also touched on the potential legal implications of AI in medicine, with Colin mentioning that some medical AI systems in the U.S. do carry malpractice insurance. The discussion concluded with an example of using the listing technique to create humorous content from unusual news stories.
Comedy Writing Techniques Discussion
The group discussed techniques for creating effective comedy, particularly focusing on how to make absurd setups believable. Jerry emphasized the importance of ensuring the premise is true, using the example of a man storing bullets in his anus, which led to a discussion about how to develop this into a humorous story using recognizable elements like Pillsbury cookies. The conversation included practical advice about creating and storing joke lists, with Jerry suggesting that writers maintain these lists for future use and to build on existing material over time.
Comedy Techniques and Listing Method
The group discussed comedy techniques, particularly focusing on the listing technique. Josh shared his idea about biscuits and gravy as a potential joke theme, which led to a discussion about how universal this food item is. Jerry demonstrated how to build jokes using the listing technique, providing examples like "baker, candlestick maker, butcher" and explaining how to create associations between dissimilar ideas. The group also explored using sexual references in comedy, with Jerry advising on how to handle potentially controversial content. While some participants like Ronna struggled with the listing technique, Jerry emphasized its value for generating joke volume and encouraged the group to continue practicing this approach.
Death by Irony Joke Creation
The group discussed creating jokes using "death by irony," focusing on professions like stripper, waitress, surgeon, and marine. They explored specific scenarios and coincidences that would create humorous ironies, such as a stripper dying of hypothermia, a surgeon contracting tetanus, and a cosmetic surgeon dying from microplastics while performing a facelift. The discussion included examples of how to structure jokes with setups that avoid being easily disproven, and how to use reframing techniques to create humor while maintaining logical consistency.
Comedy Techniques and Delivery Feedback
The group discussed techniques for identifying and creating "unassailable truths" in comedy, with examples including irony in authority figures making mistakes and using analogies to make strong points. Jerry provided feedback to Colin about delivering his Afroman story more conversationally rather than reading from a script, suggesting Colin focus on telling the story naturally rather than following written notes. The discussion included insights about how compression for social media content can affect conversational delivery, and Jerry challenged the group to identify opportunities for creating reverses and setting expectations in their performances.
Jerry suggested watching Daniel Sloss's comedy special "Jigsaw" for inspiration on discussing relationships.

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